00:04

Great, triggering intro!

''The funny thing about this video is that only around 15% of the people watching this video, will look through the whole video.. Interesting, because the people that will click off this video are the ones that need this advice the most..''

This is a very good, triggering intro where they immediately grab the viewer's attention. Because whether this will be a good video or not, just because of this one sentence people will watch it a little bit longer than they normally would because when you challenge people they often want to prove themselves. The only thing I would leave out here are the first 4 seconds of this intro. As I often mention: The first seconds of your video are the most important, so you'd rather want the voice-over to start the story right away, instead of staring at a text that says: 'educational film by'...
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00:16

Great script

''If I was like most content creators in this Niche, I would give you the top five tricks to never scroll again and I would make this video really entertaining with a fast-paced editing and we would leave this video feeling really motivated; but we would most likely not stop scrolling...''

As I was watching this video, this part gave me the idea that this is a "different kind of video" than most videos on Youtube. It is important to create this feeling because it plays a significant rolein this niche. The audience watching these videos is a little smarter than typical YouTube viewers, and if they get the impression that you aren't giving any value or that your videos were created by an AI, they will leave. So that must be your primary goal for this niche: add actual value while presenting it in a personable way
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1:15

A good example

A good video and script starts with knowing your target audience well. Because if you don't know what kind of audience is watching your videos, it's going to be hard to trigger them. And this is a good example where this channel knows exactly who their target audience is. Young men, who are looking for videos to become a better version of themselves without the feeling that they are watching a very drawn-out, not adding real value video.
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1:39

''Rules for this test''

This is a great way to get more interaction with your audience because you really get the feeling that the narrator is talking to you as a person. Since this is a typical "How to" video, and people clicked on the video for that reason as well, I think this is a very good move to use in your script. So I would definitely add this to your script if you are going to start in this niche.
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01:51

A great trick

''Our lizard brain will try to tell us that we need to be somewhere else, we need to watch this other video, or we need to do this or other things... But don't listen to it, you don't need to be anywhere else then right here. Have this in mind while watching the rest of the video.''

While this may be part of the meditation/exercise, this is also a very smart way to keep the viewer watching the video for as long as possible because they're doing an exercise and when the exercise is good, they will keep watching because they want to finish it.
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1:28

The right footage

Although it might not be my first choice to use this type of footage, we can see quite clearly in the comments that this target audience enjoys watching this. In the beginning of the video you see some more anime/cartoon footage, and then it changes to calm visuals with animations. So I would look for an editor who can show this kind of visuals, because that is simply what the target audience likes.
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3:30

Nice voice over

I think this is a very good voice over because we are dealing with a young audience here. And again, we've seen from the comments that they appreciate it when a younger person, gives advice to another younger person. So for that reason, I would definitely choose a somewhat younger male voice over, who can tell the story well where it seems like it's not so scripted.